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The War

July 14, 2010

Blog Marathon Post 14

White soldiers and black soldiers glared at each other. They were both staying at the nearby towers. The only thing that separated them were two glass panes. The glare was so intense that it could have broken the glass panes itself. The white soldiers stuck their tongue out, black soldiers mocked back at them with a hand gesture. White soldiers shouted “We will see you at the battlefield”, black soldiers shouted back “So be it”. Strategies were decided, plans were plotted and weapons were sharpened. They waited impatiently in their towers; there was smell of blood in the air. Seconds turned to minutes and minutes to hours. At last, the moment they were all waiting for arrived. They held their breath.

But sadly, that day the diner decided to put only salt in his salad and no pepper. Alas, there was no war as expected. They waited for the next diner so that they can meet at the battlefield.

Authors Note: This post is dedicated to my dear friend PB, who is very sad today. Please send your wishes his way so that he will feel better. PB, I hope atleast you smiled reading this šŸ™‚


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  1. PB :) permalink

    another nice piece of fiction … DewDrop, you are really turning it on … Amazed at ur imaginative skills šŸ™‚ … I dont want this Blog Marathon to end … Keep writing :)and yes, I smiled … and am still smiling … Thanks a lot šŸ™‚

  2. he he he he he he he!!!! šŸ™‚ šŸ™‚ šŸ™‚ So PB already smiled šŸ˜€

  3. Hope the white(salt) in your life keeps turning up more than the pepper! Good luck for the future PB :)Pooj

  4. Nice imagination. Well written! I had to think for a while to understand the story!

  5. Haha that was good one. Very nice indeed! PB looks all cheered up! šŸ™‚

  6. Hahahehehehoho (Awesome the glare could have broken the panes) . Dew ask your friend to replace glare with twinkle. He would not require vicarious things to smile. And hats off to your friendship. imlovinit

  7. @PB: Atleast you smiled šŸ™‚ Mission successful.@Kishley: Thanks. Yes, PB smiled.@Pooj: But, I like pepper more than salt in my food, just joking, thanks dear.@Madhu: šŸ™‚ It made you think? wow, great.@Pratibha: Thanks dear. Yes, PB is all cheered up.@Anon: Thanks a lot. Welcome to the blog, glad you found it funny šŸ™‚

  8. @Dew: Things which give someone a reason to smile are cherish-able. And having a kind human being like you as a friend is treasurable. so was just appreciating your concern for PB.

  9. @anon: That was very sweet of you anon. Thanks a lot šŸ™‚

  10. that was good šŸ™‚

  11. Loved this, creative indeed šŸ™‚ happened to see this through rashmi's blog . Though reading ur blog for the first time, i will surely come back. keep writing :-),

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