55 Fiction: Dolls
Blog Marathon Post 4
“Don’t go”, she said. He looked at her. She was teary-eyed. He wished he could do something about it. Instead he said, “I can’t even promise you that I will come back”. Just then, the shopkeeper took him and wrapped him in a glossy giftcover. He started his journey to make another little girl happy.
Authors Note: This is my first attempt at 55 fiction. While writing this I could understand how difficult it is to potray your thoughts in lesser words. But, if you can manage do that, how powerful it can be 🙂
Nice work in such few words … As I said, u shud write more of such creative stuff 🙂 … Keep up the good work 🙂
Good one! Waiting to see more 🙂
Small is beautiful and this work of yours supports that fact… excellent one Hima .. keep writing similar stuff 🙂
@PB: Thanks a lot. I will try my hand at more creative stuff.@Soorya: thanks. Keep reading.@Shyam: thanks a lot.
This is nice piece of writing 🙂 I'm going to attempt one soon..
A story in 55 words. Great!
tatz a good one – so u hav to count th words – I ain't good with maths 🙂
@Kishley: Thanks and welcome to the blog :)@aiby: Thanks. I did count the words 🙂
@madhu: Thanks 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
I like it, its simple n cute! 🙂
@pratibha: 🙂 Thanks dear !!!
hey gud one..enjoyed it thoroughly! 🙂