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55 Fiction: Dolls

July 4, 2010

Blog Marathon Post 4

“Don’t go”, she said. He looked at her. She was teary-eyed. He wished he could do something about it. Instead he said, “I can’t even promise you that I will come back”. Just then, the shopkeeper took him and wrapped him in a glossy giftcover. He started his journey to make another little girl happy.

Authors Note: This is my first attempt at 55 fiction. While writing this I could understand how difficult it is to potray your thoughts in lesser words. But, if you can manage do that, how powerful it can be 🙂

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12 Comments
  1. PB :) permalink

    Nice work in such few words … As I said, u shud write more of such creative stuff 🙂 … Keep up the good work 🙂

  2. Good one! Waiting to see more 🙂

  3. Small is beautiful and this work of yours supports that fact… excellent one Hima .. keep writing similar stuff 🙂

  4. @PB: Thanks a lot. I will try my hand at more creative stuff.@Soorya: thanks. Keep reading.@Shyam: thanks a lot.

  5. This is nice piece of writing 🙂 I'm going to attempt one soon..

  6. A story in 55 words. Great!

  7. tatz a good one – so u hav to count th words – I ain't good with maths 🙂

  8. @Kishley: Thanks and welcome to the blog :)@aiby: Thanks. I did count the words 🙂

  9. @madhu: Thanks 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂

  10. I like it, its simple n cute! 🙂

  11. @pratibha: 🙂 Thanks dear !!!

  12. hey gud one..enjoyed it thoroughly! 🙂

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